Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Social media provides people all around the globe not
only with the communication
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only communication with the
service but
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service, but
also
with a variety of information
and I believe that social networking brings more benefits than drawbacks. This
essay will present some positive and negative sides of this
issue supported by the relevant examples and give a conclusion.
One evident benefit to web communicating is that, this
is an exiting and less expensive way of connection
. To illustrate, as a lot of people nowadays have an access to the social platforms Suggestion
connecting
such
as the Facebook and the Instagram, more people can afford to hold international phone or video conversation via social media services due two
its cheaper price in comparison with old-fashioned calls via home phone. in the direction of
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Moreover
, a public platform like the twitter has an innovative format of interaction
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interaction, such
such
as posting twits, which allow people not only to be more aware about current interests and concerns of their friends but also
about latest news. Another advantage is that social media is a convenient and fast way of getting information
you are interested in. Suggestion
the information
For example
, visiting the website or downloading app of the one of the media platforms such
as Google, BBC
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On the other hand
, there are obvious disadvantages of utilizing high-tech for communication and reading press
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the press
Firstly
, some people became addicted to social network
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social networks
For instance
, people tend to spend most of their time in
the net. Suggestion
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Consequently
, those people can suffer from lacking
of emotional connection with friends in the real life. Suggestion
lack
Furthermore
, concentration
of the technology-addicted people might be destructed during the workday. Suggestion
the concentration
Secondly
, due to the huge amount of information
on the web, it can be difficult to track the source of articles
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the articles
Therefore
, straggling
with distinguishing between fake news and trustful statements may result in disinformation.
To conclude, technology in the field of the media network influence people to communicate more and be aware of engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
news
. Despite of some drawback related to Suggestion
the news
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issue, I believe that its advantages outweigh disadvantages mainly because social technology save people’s money, makes their communication exciting and allows them to use convenient and quick way to get necessary information
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