Today,
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extent students are involved in volunteer activity under the authority of high schools. A group of people considers the obligatory can be put into practice relating the social issues for university/ college learners. I would totally agree with
this
view.
Without any doubt, the additional activities help the development of learner’s skills, namely communication, language, computer.
This
idea would be acceptable that
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participation in the NGOs, the charity, in the
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prevents timidness, by which a young person could act with self-reliance.
Following
this
, the unpaid community is a relevant method for implementing our knowledge practically,
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learning theories,
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loads of books. Getting these challenges, the students easily get used to employability,
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.
Moreover
,
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social activity does not just take action
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current talents, an event we have gained
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half of them through our representation.
For example
,
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participated as a volunteer during my university years. Now I have plenty of aptitudes, which could really help me in my future career.
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argument could be accepted as a
further
significant factor. Social facilities may
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a considerable impact
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an individual responsibility,
such
as their role,
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of
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environmental issues,
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. The remedies
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the major problems
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cooperation between the government and
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civil society (including students up to 18
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), namely the young generation would conscientiously reflect with activities,
such
as
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innovative points-of-view. As an example, The pressure of youngsters
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changed the anti-democratic regime to a democratic one in Georgia. As an underlying power behind
this
was the new generation’s initiatives.
Admittedly, the mandatory program would have disadvantages,
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this
I am sure that the advantages of
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will outweigh its drawbacks.
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, the official initiatives can construct
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new skills,
as well as
encourage being
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responsible among
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high school learners. The benefits of
this
approach are more useful and productive than non-activity.