More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally of socially rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

Nowadays,

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number of

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people

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using different ways to communicate than

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look

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aspect of interaction. There are many pros and cons

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using them so

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essay will outline the advantages and disadvantages of communication reasons and mention some possible opinions of mine. On the one hand, many businessmen and individuals opt to share

a confidential information

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confidential information

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and

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various types of interconnection,

such

as video conference, emails, telegram, Facebook and so on. In my opinion, using them is beneficial because you can interact with many

people

at the same time and any location

of

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the world.

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, using

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technology is efficient and convenient to tackle our problems when we are in a part of the world so they usually rescue us from spending money and commuting

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.

Furthermore

, many employers prefer using them rather

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masked to surface for intercommunication because as I mentioned earlier it is comfortable and effective. My point of view is that if these technologies were not at the present time, we would definitely suffer from interdependence

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other.

On the other hand

, there are

also

many drawbacks

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utilizing the devices in data sharing in organizations. Some

people

say that essential messages can be easily transferred by someone to other

people

for a bribe which may destroy the future of existing companies.

Moreover

, hackers can steal

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crucial information from companies or someone if their details are not secured. There is an example that can fully illustrate

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point is that many famous companies like

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Tesla,

Microsoft

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and Microsoft

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were stolen some important details by hackers

then

they had to develop

the

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source of security that

can

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protect them and up to date no one

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crack or rob their

stuffs

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In addition

,

people

should be careful with their things. From what we have discussed above, we can clearly draw a conclusion that there are many merits and demerits of using them for communication and it cannot be overlooked

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so My opinion is that

people

should be cautious to utilize

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them.