The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The map depicts how the rural area of Ryemouth has expanded over two and half decades from 1995 till date.
It is noticeable that in
north-west
direction sports facilities got developed. Apart from that, commercial Correct article usage
the north-west
oppurtunities
Correct your spelling
opportunities
also
got flourished. However
, a fishing port gotn
demolished from the south.
In 1995,farmland and forest Correct your spelling
got
exissted
in the northeast area of the village. Correct your spelling
existed
Moreover
, on both the
sides of the road, there were Correct article usage
apply
row wise
housing facilities Add a hyphen
row-wise
as well as
a seperate
plot having 4 buildings in Correct your spelling
separate
thenorthwest
area. Correct your spelling
the northwest
In addition
, there were hotels and cafe
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cafes
on
the Change preposition
in
south-east
direction and not only the shops but Correct your spelling
southeast
also
fish
market has already been established Add an article
the fish
in
the southwest side, Change preposition
on
along with
the fishing port in the center
of the south.
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centre
In
present, the farmland and the forest park got merged and is Change preposition
At
replaaced
with a golf court and a couple of tennis court in the northeast part. Correct your spelling
replaced
Whereas
, in the northwest, housing amenities got increased with
stretching the pathway leading to two newly constructed houses.
Coming to the southwest of the village, a new park got Change preposition
by
builed
with no changes to the hotel and cafe. Correct your spelling
build
built
Apart from
this
, the shops and the fish market got transformed into restaurants and appartments
respectively. Whilst, the fishing port to the south of Correct your spelling
apartments
the south of
the village has been demolished.Remove the redundancy
apply
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