You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to hun about the match.

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Dear, I was really sorry to learn

tgat

pointing out something

that

you met with an accident. I hope you are doing well now. I want to give

brief description

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a brief description

about the

match

we had

this

weekend. The cricket

match

we played

this

weekend was

good but

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good, but

we all really miss you. I am happy to tell you that we won the

match

. I know

this

match

was really very important for you as by winning

this

match

, your winning

match

score will be 35. The

match

was

teally

in accordance with truth or fact or reality

really

very exciting and with so

much

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many

twist and suspense. In the mid of the

match

, no one can decide you

is going

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are going

were going

to win. We were about to

loss but

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loss, but

the

opponent

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opposing

team member not able to catch the ball. It was

wet

Suggestion

the wettest

day and the pitch was

muddy which

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muddy, which

makes the surface

flippery

a shoe for swimming; the paddle-like front is an aid in swimming (especially underwater)

flipper

Thus

, the opponent didn'

able to catch the ball.

This

was isn'

so rocking because you weren'

there to crack your jokes in the mid of the game every time. I remember

our

things belonging to us

ours

lst

match

, the situation was so serious as we were on our

last

over but

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over, but

your funny nature didn'

stop you

for

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from

cracking your joke. To the

last

, let me know

whenyou

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when you

came back home and keep updated with your health and I will give you updates about our matches. Feel free to contact if you need anything. We can

also

make some arrangements if you want to watch

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the next match

match

. The whole team is sending you warm wishes and get well soon friend. Best Regards, Pratibha

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

259 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn’t able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to hun about the match.

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In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Write about the following topic: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extend do you agree?