The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The provided bar chart illustrates both men and women with different kinds of employment
status
, which had enjoyed their spare Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
time
between 1998 to 1999.
Overall
, Unemployed and Retired people
of both sexes have the most relished time
that they spent. Despite
, the employed female and Correct pronoun usage
thisDespite
male
have the least rate of enjoyment compared to those who don't work at all. Whether or not, Fix the agreement mistake
males
people
have different status
of employment, they will enjoy their free Fix the agreement mistake
statuses
time
in some circumstances.
As we can see that
, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
, who don't have jobs or retired
, are satisfied in their free Add a missing verb
are retired
time
at almost the same percentages, a male has over 80 percent
, a female has just under 80 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
On the other hand
, those who are full
Add a hyphen
full-time
time
employed were at a small level of satisfaction compared to the above percentages. Male was over 40 percent
and females were under 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.
If we turn to, housewives and part-Change the spelling
per cent
time
women employees, the percentages of enjoyment were slightly greater than employed people
. It is rated at 50 percent
and 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively.Change the spelling
per cent
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