the chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The chart illustrates the
propotion
of residential houses classified into Correct your spelling
proportion
possesed
and leased Correct your spelling
possessed
shelter
in England and Wales over the period between 1918 to 2011.
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shelters
Overall
, it is evident that there was
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were
oposite
trends in both types of Correct your spelling
opposite
accommodation
. Owning accommodation
saw an upward trend and vice versa, renting accommodation
saw a downward trend.
From 1918 to 1939, housholds
in Correct your spelling
households
possesed
Correct your spelling
possessed
accommodation
saw an increase from 23 percent
to 32 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
then
it remained the same until 1953. Similarly
, renting accommodation
was
fell from 78 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
leveled
off at 69 Change the spelling
levelled
percent
over 14 years. Change the spelling
per cent
While
owning houses was rise to over 40 percent
in 1961, renting Change the spelling
per cent
housed
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houses
was
decreased by 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
and reached Change the spelling
per cent
at
the same figures for the Change preposition
apply
propotion
in both types with 50 Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
percent
after 10 years. From 1981 to 2001, there Change the spelling
per cent
steadly
increase from 60 Correct your spelling
steadily
steady
percent
to nearly 70 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in owned shelters and Change the spelling
per cent
decrease
from 40 Correct article usage
a decrease
percent
to just over 30 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in another one. In the Change the spelling
per cent
next
10 years, the figures were changed in two types, while
owning accommodation
was
decreased to 64 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
, the percentage of renting Change the spelling
per cent
house
saw Fix the agreement mistake
houses
an
slight increase to 36 Change the article
a
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Although
there were different trends, residential house in rented accommodation
was the highest option over the beginning of the period.Submitted by langoccham on
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