Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve the quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defence. What is your opinion?

Art is a fundamental part of society and should be funded as it enriches lives through

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and thought provoking ideas. Art represents ideas and objects in new and interesting ways that allow people to think more deeply about the world and appreciate

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, Arts funding represents a small fraction of the amount of money spent by governments and does not significantly impact the amount of taxes that need to be collected. In

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essay, the value of funding the Arts will be discussed.

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pieces of art are derided as being worthless or inaccessible as they include ordinary objects taken out of their normal context or objects that have no obvious meaning, they provoke thinking. People will question

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the artists’ motives

, and whether the piece is useful, valuable or beautiful. In more accessible forms of art

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as music, literature and painting a story is told and allows us to build empathy with people in different situations and can expose prejudice and injustice. Supporting the Arts

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improves our thinking and ultimately our society. A

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value of

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the Arts

is that it brings

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to public spaces. In many cities around the

world people

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world, people

can be seen having their photographs taken with sculptures or architecture. Public arts, which is almost always

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funded,

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cities more interesting and is appreciated by both locals and tourists. Art

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attracts

people to cities and has economic values. Cities including Cannes and Edinburgh are famous for their arts festivals and draw in enormous numbers of tourists. People

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visit many cities for their permanent art collections. A key consideration for any

government

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is the extent to which it should fund the arts. Almost always, the arts represent a very small proportion of

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funding, which is primarily focused on health and education.

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, modest funding for the Arts has little impact on taxpayers. In summary, Art provides a source of

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and provokes thought and is worthy of funding, particularly as it usually does not represent a significant proportion of

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funding