The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the layout of a university sports
centre
right now and the 2nd layout will be the future plans about sports where some improvement will be added to increase the facilities of the sports
centre
. Overall, there are lots of new facilities will be implemented
instead
of two outdoor courts.
However
, at the
centre
of
this
sports
centre
will remain unchanged. In the current layout there is no sports shop, sports hall, café and dance studio.
As a result
, a sports shop will be developed on the left of the entrance, a café will be initiated at the right of the entrance.
However
, two changing rooms will be added at the
side
of the west-east and southeast corner. Another major significant development is two dance studios will be coined on the east
side
of the University Sports
Centre
.
Besides
, a leisure pool will be constructed on the west
side
and a sports hall will be developed on the east
side
of the University sports
centre
.
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