The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans illustrate the layout of a university sports

centre

right now and the 2nd layout will be the future plans about sports where some improvement will be added to increase the facilities of the sports

centre

. Overall, there are lots of new facilities will be implemented

instead

of two outdoor courts.

However

, at the

centre

this

sports

centre

will remain unchanged. In the current layout there is no sports shop, sports hall, café and dance studio.

As a result

, a sports shop will be developed on the left of the entrance, a café will be initiated at the right of the entrance.

However

, two changing rooms will be added at the

side

of the west-east and southeast corner. Another major significant development is two dance studios will be coined on the east

side

of the University Sports

Centre

Besides

, a leisure pool will be constructed on the west

side

and a sports hall will be developed on the east

side

of the University sports

centre

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