These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today’s generation, most students prefer to enrol in a University because of better quality standards, wide resources, good social community and tremendous extracurricular activities. They usually spend more

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and

money

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to achieve

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up

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education

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like earning a

degree

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to achieve higher credentials. Though allotting more

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and

money

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in order to secure a

degree

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from a University is significantly a financial challenge and

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time consuming

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to most people, the writer firmly believes that it is a considerable form of investment for a lifetime developmental benefit. Financial is one of the biggest

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to consider in deciding to choose a

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in a University. Thousands per year

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required because of expensive tuition fees and school requirements.

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, students who are away from their home town will

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extra cash for accommodation and daily expenses.

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, in the

Philippines

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the average tuition fee yearly would cost P130000 to P250000 but if you decide to upgrade to a higher level of

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like

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a master’s

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degree

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or doctorate

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, the cost would probably double or triple.

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, it may cause

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debts. After

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or college, starting a job and earning

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can be initiated earlier but if you desire to pursue continuing

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you will

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to utilize more

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extending the

time

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when you will earn

money

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. Higher degrees require 5

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unlike

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the usual 4

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. Medicine prerequisites a

4 year

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degree

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before a student is allowed to continue a 4-year course in a medical school and

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complete

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3 to 7

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of residency. Those

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spent studying

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could have been used for a job which may have given you a huge amount of

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.

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, bigger opportunities

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for

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those who sacrificed

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and

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for a higher level of

education

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. Even though later in life they started earning

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, the salary of a

degree

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holder is much way more competitive because higher positions are available and promotions are more viable.

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, graduating with a

degree

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would mean that you are well equipped with exceptional skills and knowledge because of advanced training and lessons taught. To summarize, attaining a

degree

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for higher credentials is difficult and challenging but if students

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weigh the advantages that it can provide for tomorrow those problems are like a dot

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too small to compare with.