These days, more people are going to university than in the past. They start work later in life and with higher qualifications. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today’s generation, most students prefer to enrol in a University because of better quality standards, wide resources, good social community and tremendous extracurricular activities. They usually spend more

time

and

money

to achieve

levelled

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up

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education

like earning a

degree

to achieve higher credentials. Though allotting more

time

and

money

in order to secure a

degree

from a University is significantly a financial challenge and

time consuming

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to most people, the writer firmly believes that it is a considerable form of investment for a lifetime developmental benefit. Financial is one of the biggest

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to consider in deciding to choose a

degree

in a University. Thousands per year

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required because of expensive tuition fees and school requirements.

In addition

, students who are away from their home town will

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extra cash for accommodation and daily expenses.

For instance

, in the

Philippines

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the average tuition fee yearly would cost P130000 to P250000 but if you decide to upgrade to a higher level of

education

like

master’s

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degree

or doctorate

degree

, the cost would probably double or triple.

Thus

, it may cause

long term

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debts. After

high-school

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or college, starting a job and earning

money

can be initiated earlier but if you desire to pursue continuing

education

you will

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to utilize more

time

thus

extending the

time

when you will earn

money

. Higher degrees require 5

years

unlike

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the usual 4

years

. Medicine prerequisites a

4 year

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degree

before a student is allowed to continue a 4-year course in a medical school and

then

complete

a

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3 to 7

years

of residency. Those

years

spent studying

when

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could have been used for a job which may have given you a huge amount of

money

.

However

, bigger opportunities

awaits

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those who sacrificed

time

and

money

for a higher level of

education

. Even though later in life they started earning

money

, the salary of a

degree

holder is much way more competitive because higher positions are available and promotions are more viable.

Moreover

, graduating with a

degree

would mean that you are well equipped with exceptional skills and knowledge because of advanced training and lessons taught. To summarize, attaining a

degree

for higher credentials is difficult and challenging but if students

will

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weigh the advantages that it can provide for tomorrow those problems are like a dot

that is

too small to compare with.