Logging of rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

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modern world, deforestation is becoming more common, many countries utilize reforestation to make more space for the housing and other entertainment

such

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as shopping mall, arena, and other else. Those

wood which

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woods, which

woods which

was cut will

also

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be able to be

sell

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sold

as a

meterial

the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object

material

memorial

of some merchandise. In my opinion, logging of

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forests is going to cause

a

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an

extremely severe problem to human and

animals

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animal

life.

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and foremost,

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forests are the most important factor to reduce the carbon dioxide of the air. Nowadays,

greenhouse effect

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the greenhouse effect

is getting more uncontrollable, it

tend

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tends

to increase the

temparature

the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)

temperature

temperatures

all over the world. Not only human beings are suffering because of

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,

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,

but

also

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animals which live

in

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on

the pole will lose their

home which

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home, which

is melting all the time by the result of the greenhouse effect.

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, high

temparature

the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)

temperature

temperatures

may be the reason of the forest fire. It

take

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takes

away the

habitant

the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs

habitat

of the wild animals and let them no place to go

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end up with death. The lack of

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forests lead to

extinction

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the extinction

of those wild animals which live in the

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forests since many centuries ago.

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greenhouse effect is well known by humanity, they still do not realise that cutting the forest may increase the risk of the extinction of the human beings.

Rain

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forests mantain

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forests, mountain

forests mountain

forests maintain

atmosphere which

protect

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protects

us from the strong light of the sun. Deforestation is equivalent to destroy the atmosphere and allow the sun keep devastating us with some skin disease which is becoming universal. Beside that, people should not be felling the

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forests because technology nowadays can totally replace the wood as a material of

structure

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the structure

instead

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of using brick and concrete. To put it in a nutshell, deforestation should be forbidden and the government must introduce new law to restrict human from cutting the

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forests which

is

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are

precious in the modern world. Every

countries

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country

should appeal people to replant the forest which had been cut.