Logging of rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern world, deforestation is becoming more common, many countries utilize reforestation to make more space for the housing and other entertainment
such
as shopping mall, arena, and other else. Those
wood which
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woods, which
woods which
was cut will
also
be able to be
sell
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sold
as a
meterial
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
material
memorial
of some merchandise. In my opinion, logging of
rain
forests is going to cause
a
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an
extremely severe problem to human and
animals
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animal
life.
First
and foremost,
rain
forests are the most important factor to reduce the carbon dioxide of the air. Nowadays,
greenhouse effect
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the greenhouse effect
is getting more uncontrollable, it
tend
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tends
to increase the
temparature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
temperatures
all over the world. Not only human beings are suffering because of
this
,
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,
but
also
animals which live
in
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on
the pole will lose their
home which
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home, which
is melting all the time by the result of the greenhouse effect.
Furthermore
, high
temparature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
temperatures
may be the reason of the forest fire. It
take
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takes
away the
habitant
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
of the wild animals and let them no place to go
then
end up with death. The lack of
rain
forests lead to
extinction
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the extinction
of those wild animals which live in the
rain
forests since many centuries ago.
Although
greenhouse effect is well known by humanity, they still do not realise that cutting the forest may increase the risk of the extinction of the human beings.
Rain
forests mantain
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forests, mountain
forests mountain
forests maintain
atmosphere which
protect
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protects
us from the strong light of the sun. Deforestation is equivalent to destroy the atmosphere and allow the sun keep devastating us with some skin disease which is becoming universal. Beside that, people should not be felling the
rain
forests because technology nowadays can totally replace the wood as a material of
structure
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the structure
instead
of using brick and concrete. To put it in a nutshell, deforestation should be forbidden and the government must introduce new law to restrict human from cutting the
rain
forests which
is
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are
precious in the modern world. Every
countries
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country
should appeal people to replant the forest which had been cut.
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