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Studies suggest that the rise in the consumption of junk foods is the major cause of obesity. Some people argue that this problem can be tackled to a great extent by increasing the price of these food items. Do you agree or disagree?

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 Contemporary era, Fast
food
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 is much in demands by the adolescent, teenager, and Adults. According to recent studies on Junk
food
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, It suggests that Adiposity is a result of the huge consumption of canned
food
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. On the other side, many people believe that Portliness would have been controlled by inflation in the
cost
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 of
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food
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 products. I agree with
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 perspective as the increased price leads to less consumption of these
products especially
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products, especially
 for those people who have budget constraints. People are aware of the detrimental effects of junk
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. Fast
food
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 contains many deleterious ingredients which signify for excess weight. One of the reasons for obesity is the low
cost
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 of fast
food
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. Due to fewer prices, It is easily purchased by all kinds of people. Many kinds of research have shown that, If the product
cost
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 is high
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 there will be low demand for the commodity.
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, People would find it less attractive to buy dehydrated
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 items at
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inflated
 prices.
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, there is another part of society that can still promptly acquire junk
food
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 even in the price escalation. An alternative method can be used to reduce the intake of
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 items among wealthy individuals. Diverse programs should initiate which makes aware of the destructive impacts on healths through various
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modes, for
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- posters, videos on social media platforms, blogs, and articles, etc. In My opinion, These kinds of programs will support to reduce the utilization of unhealthy
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. To sum up, I strongly believe that,
Inflation
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Inflation, cost
cost
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 of junk
food
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 will be beneficial to lessen the usage of it.
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, Informational events should be started to aware of the side-effect of healthy
food
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.
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