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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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In today's world for getting entertained people are finding various avenues
such
 as watching movies, dancing on favourite songs and many more.
Also
music
 makes vital role in
this
 process
therefore
 we see different types of
music
 in all over the world.
Basically we
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Basically, we
 need
music
 to enjoy
life
 with melodious beats
also
 to reduce stress. In
this
 essay I will explain the importance of traditional
music
 along with need in depth.
Music
 have
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 own history. From ancient time individuals use it for celebrating various festivals of
life
.
However there
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However, there
 are some communities in the world who play
music
 on
funeral
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funerals
the funeral
a funeral
. In India,
for instance
, in the northern
states specially
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states, especially
states especially
 in Muslim minorities, sing songs Infront the dead people. Basically it helps to reduce silence in the place. The other point is,
music
try
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tries
 to decrease
stress
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the stress
 of workloads. Nowadays we all going through anxiety and pressure for maintaining balance of
life
. Because of office targets and family problems, stress got increased drastically.
Music
 helps to maintain mental health. For all these reasons we need
music
 in our
life
. While talking about
traditional
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traditions
 and international
music
, I believe traditional
music
 is more important. It
represent
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represents
culture
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the culture
a culture
 of our own country. Every nation carries
history
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the history
 of
music
 from longer period. It gives us separate identity when you played
music
 from your origin or when you sing
song
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a song
songs
the song
 from
riginal language
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the original language
original language
regional language
. International
music
do not have
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does not have
 a proper
base
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base, however
however
 it is a combination or fusion of different kinds of
music
.
Moreover modern
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Moreover, modern
 songs are developed with the help of digital and advance techniques, they are not composed of basic instruments beats. For
this
 reason we have to preserve and teach traditional
music
 to maintain
importance
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the importance
 of it. In conclusion,
music
 is a one kind of language to express our thoughts. For several reasons we need it. Specially traditional
music
 plays
important role
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an important role
 in all the process.
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