Nowadays, people are spending more time away from their homes because they spend longer in their workplace. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
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, working hard and long is a key factor to develop the economic level of the country. Linking Words
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, comparing successful and unsuccessful companies, reveal that the progress rate of organizations which their staffs spend longer time than the average are rapider than the others.
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regard, the most important negative point is that people’s relationships specifically with their partners is affected badly. To explain more, a psychologist in Iran who researched about the divorcing reason in 2008, indicated that the reason of 40% of divorces is that couples spend a little time together in a day. Except for Linking Words
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