1.You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

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Dear Sir/Madam My Name is Mubi and I have attended a job interview for Medical Administrator Position. I am very delighted to inform you that I accept your Job offer and I would like to request you written Offer letter. As I am currently on the notice period until Friday, October 25, 2024, So I will be able to start at your clinic by Monday, October 28, 2024.

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, if your company is comfortable with these settlements, I will definitely join by the end of October. I want to learn more about your clinic, So I am willing to do Online courses and complete my orientation.

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, I will forward my degree and certificates for your reference. If you have

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inquiries or require additional documents, I can be reached via email. I am very enthusiastic to start my new job and get involved in your clinic. I anticipate,

await

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and await

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your positive response. Sincerely, Mubi

mubassirakolia78Tue Oct 15 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Maintain consistent tense usage for smoother reading.

Task Achievement

Avoid using colloquial phrases such as 'So' to begin sentences in formal letters.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, suitable for a formal letter.

Task Achievement

All necessary information regarding the acceptance and start date is included, fully addressing the task.

Task Achievement

The tone is formal and respectful, which is appropriate for accepting a job offer.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
acceptance
position offered
start date
flexibility
documentation
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1.You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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