Avoiding preventable illnesses is the responsibility of individuals and their families not government

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As of 11 May 2020, a total of 4.216.283 people had been reported confirmed for
coronavirus
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disease (
COVID-
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19) globally. Among these, there have been 284.724 deaths reported related to
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19, and 1.506.527 people already recovered from the
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19.
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19 turns the world upside down. The impact caused by
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19 is very large in the world's
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
life. Many people blame the
government
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because of
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problem. Peoples considered that the
government
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was negligent in handling
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19 even though the
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has taken many actions in overcoming
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pandemic
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. They said that it is the
government
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's
responsibility
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to prevent people from getting the
COVID-
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19. I completely disagree with
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statement because it is the individual's
responsibility
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to avoid being infected by
this
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virus. There are some reasons why it is the individual’s
responsibility
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to avoid being infected by
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virus. Many people are still ignorant of
government
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regulations. On 24th April 2020, the
government
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legally issued the prohibition of homecoming or Indonesia we usually called it “Mudik”. On 5th May 2020, Polda Metro Jaya noted that the total number of homecoming violators from the 1st - 11th day reached 11.630. Individual
Responsibility
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is the key to reduce the virus
spread
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. The
government
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does not stop to always remind us to always keep a distance from others about 3 meters, avoid the crowd, do not leave the house if there is nothing urgent, use masker if we leave the house, and always remind us to wash our hands diligently. Lack of individual
responsibility
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will make
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pandemic
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era cycle to no end. Imagine if we don’t wear a mask and
then
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meet a person infected with the
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19. The risk of being infected by
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19 is so high because our face area is very exposed. The medical team who
wear
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wears
protective clothing can still become infected. How about us who don’t wear protective clothing at all. If we infected by
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19, there is a big chance that we will get people around us infected too. If we infected people around us, there is a big chance that they will make other people infected.
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will make
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pandemic
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era cycle to no end. Every Individual’s
responsibility
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is so highly needed to make
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pandemic
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era end. Many people said that the
government
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must take
responsibility
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for the widespread distribution of
COVID-
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19. But in fact, the
government
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already does the best to prevent the
spread
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of the viruses. Many things have been done by the
government
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to fight
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COVID-
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19.
For example
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, the
government
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conducted rapid tests in many areas, multiplying health equipment (masker, APD), make regulations with the aim to reduce the
spread
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of the virus. But many people still violate the regulations that the
government
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already made and blame the
government
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and state that the
government
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is negligent in handling
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virus. The
spread
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of the virus will be reduced if everyone obeys the
government
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regulation. If everyone follows
government
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regulation, it will reduce the probability of infected by
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19. In summary, the
government
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has done its best to reduce the
spread
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of
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virus. But it all depends on each individual. Whether every individual has a high
responsibility
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for themselves or not. Every individual has the
responsibility
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to prevent themselves from being infected by
COVID-
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19.

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