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Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children's study. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion?

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Playing
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 game as a hobby is enjoying an upsurge of popularity among young teenagers worldwide. Some guardians argue that the
computer
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 games worth is very low rather
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 children's study and it has furnished to harmful effect of physical and mental development of teenagers.
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 with, One of the most obvious disadvantages is that these games are highly addictive, compelling children sit in the front of the
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 for many straight hours.
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, they have little time for sports activities, many of them start developing health problems. According to a recent survey, the obesity rate among adolescents aged between 13 and 19 is souring in developed and developing nations. One of the contributing factors is the lack of physical exercise.
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, screening game produce radiation, so that cause many eyesight problems.From
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, it can be said that the game produces many physical problems to children's development. In the similar way, the indulgence in
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 games is detrimental to their mentality in various aspects. For the one thing, an increasing amount of time spent playing playing games means less and less time devoted to their study. No wonder that teenagers having
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 undesirable habit, so that they have faced to fulfil their work or assignments. For another, being accustomed to fast changing images which circumstances they can hardly concentrate on any serious subject.
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Moreover teenagers
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Moreover, teenagers
 are exposed to sexual and violent scenes featured in many
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computer
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. To conclude, from both physiological and psychological points of view.
Computer
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 games are indeed valueless on the development of young children.
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