Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think
distance
learning from home is effective for the students as attending school
or universities, while other people have opposite view of it. This
essay will agree that they both
have their own benefits and both
studying assists children to learn well for their career goal.
On one hand, distance
study
makes the learner easy
to attend class at their schedule. Even though they are ill or not became able to go to Accept comma addition
learner, easy
school
, it does not matter as they can conveniently attend class online from home bed. That
why, it's assist children to be regular at Suggestion
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study
at any difficult time
. For instance
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year I was sick so I was not woory
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attendance, nor
study
because I was able to attend class online so no gap in my study
. Moreover
, it's save
the Suggestion
saved
time
if one has to go to work as well. Even more, if they have online study
, then
they will not have hectic life
and manage Suggestion
hectic lives
a hectic life
time
easily for study
. They don't need to rush and it's save
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saved
time
as well as energy. In addition
, distance
learning is always cheaper then
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than
school
. So anyone with low budget can develop their career by online study
.
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the other hand
distance
learning cannot provide same pros as attending school
and university. It might be because they think there will not be direct face
to face
communication between teacher and student which can become obstacle
to develop Suggestion
an obstacle
mutual relationship
between them. Even though, they Suggestion
mutual relationships
a mutual relationship
study
very well by online, there will be dearth
of Suggestion
a dearth
peers
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peer
study
which impact on their interpersonal skill. For examples, if children study
in school
they talk with their friends and teacher face
to face
and they build up their confidence and eradicate their nervousness while speaking infront
of anyone.
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both
study
have their own value and they Suggestion
studies
both
assist student
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the student
is
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are
both
helps student
to learn and to build up their future.
To conclude, Suggestion
students
the student
distance
learning and school
or college attending learning both
main goal is to provide education to the toddlers and makes them successful in life. Hence
, they both
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