More developing countries are being given aid by international organisations to help them in their development plan. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
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supplying monetary assistance can uplift countries' economic situation and it is able to induce to Linking Words
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believe that practical support and receiving advice on sustainable Accept comma addition
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development
may assist them to find out Use synonyms
better
solution for their problems and those states may show efficient performance in every sector.
On the one hand, ensuring Suggestion
the best
development
assistance to those nations that are on the way of progress would assist them to use the money to formulate Use synonyms
such
policies that can be beneficial in terms of economic growth and decreasing unemployment problem to a certain extend. In order to eliminate economic barriers which can bring about weakening developing countries' improvement those states may spend foreign Linking Words
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on
the purpose of providing to generate more income that underpin sustainable Suggestion
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rising
of countries' total earnings. Along with, recovering economic situation may create Suggestion
the rising
condition
for small Suggestion
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enterprenuers
to take loans with the intention of establishing a someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
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successful
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decrement
unemployment rate
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the unemployment rate
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entities
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.
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On the other hand
, advising those states on how to form policies and what techniques should be followed to carry out them efficiently can result in coming up with Linking Words
better solution
and efficient performance in different sectors. If transnational organizations explain the method of successful Suggestion
better solutions
a better solution
development
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to
those nations, they try to learn their problems and bring about Suggestion
of
novel way
as they investigate states' matter in depth and take on responsibility for solving their Suggestion
novel ways
a novel way
challanges
on their own, as well as eliciting of immediate concerns and dealing with them in distinctive sector causes take exception to
challenges
development
in those sectors. As a consequence, without being depended on any organizations, progressing countries can solve their problems owing to searching fundamental problems in their economy. Use synonyms
For instance
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World Bank
with the aim of performing better improvement. I believe Suggestion
the World Bank
this
approach is better as it teaches them independence to grow.
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aid
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more effective approach
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a more effective approach
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