Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views.

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Over the years, advances in technology have revolutionized human learning and teaching. Opinions are divided on whether online classes will become the most dominant way of learning as it could alter the
tradition
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traditional
one or conventional courses will continue playing
vital role
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a vital role
in
education system
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the education system
. In my opinion, each approach has its own benefits,
however
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
support the former.
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and foremost, it is undeniable that e-learning reap
unquestionably
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unquestionable
advantages. Off the top of it
,
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,
students will be able to schedule their own time and positively choose their own place
such
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as home or library
.
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In facts, many people have to deal with the distance between their place
to
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with
school. By learning online
,
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,
ones can save their time to travel.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, neither students nor educators are
use
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using
modern facilities,
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can reduce the budget and the school fee would be cost-effectiveness. Learning on the internet
also
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create the chances for students living in
underpriviledged
lacking the rights and advantages of other members of society
underprivileged
areas,
therefore
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they still can get the certification from high
reputation
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reputed
universities. To exemplify, the number of people in small regions of Vietnam got the scholarships from schools in big cities.Above all,
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advancement can be seen as
essential step
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an essential step
forward.
Conversely
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
hold a belief that face-to-face learning
can not
can not
cannot
be phased out due to the following reasons.
Firstly
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, the significance of interaction and rivalry with classmates in an educational
enviroments
the totality of surrounding conditions
environments
contributes students to have the incentive in improving their communication skills as well as have
all-round outlook
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an all-round outlook
of the world. One more reason is that
comprehendsively
in an all-inclusive manner
comprehensively
studying includes notional and practical knowledge and seems like online learning can not reinforce their experiences. Apart from that, regarding to students who are not self-discipline or self-awareness, learning from home is
the better
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the best
way for them to cheat.
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why e-learning should be implemented in order to make teachers restrict and control their students not to be lazy and stimuli for scholastics more effective
.
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In conclusion, from what
has been discuss
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has been discussed
above, it is true that online studying method is revolutionary in
comteporary tertiary education system
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the contemporary tertiary education system
contemporary tertiary education system
.
However
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, I believe that the advantages of traditional way outweigh the e-learning
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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