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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Businesses play a contributory role in societies for making money and many other reasons. In my point of view social responsibilities are as essential as financial support in countries that clients have to consider them as the most important thing for establishing businesses;
thus
, I strongly agree with
this
 idea.
First
 of all, not only can a company’s income increase the number of employees, but it can
also
 develop the standard of living. Simply put strong business can provide great job opportunities for young people so that they can get married easily or they can spend their energy in positive activities;
thus
, the rate of corruption will be decreased.
Secondly
, Innovation will happen in the society by financial support that means enterprises can allocate
a
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an
 especial budget for searching and exploring new ideas to bring more convenience to people’s lives. A good illustration is Apple Company; as it develops its investment by selling more products.
the
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The
 reason was increasing human resource and new products leading to it, being famous.
In addition
, money is not the only reason companies have to work.
there
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There
 are a bunch of reasons, especially the health of society and
environment
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the environment
.
climate
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Climate
has been changed
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has been changing
 by companies so the big responsibilities
is paying
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are paying
 attention to their industrial activities.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, factories have to work without
adverse effects
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the adverse effects
 that take time and effort. They can encourage people to use products having few or no side effects on the environment or they can invent devices without harmful effects on the society. In conclusion, businesses have big responsibilities against to the human life by two reasons and both of them have the special places and it can be negligible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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