A recent newspaper article reported that a 14 years old boy who seriously destroyed his school got the punishment to clean Street instead of being sent to prison. Do you think this is right or do you think that such criminal should be sent to prison.

Juvenile delinquency is a thorny issue which needs proper consideration. Gone are the days, when children were grown up to be obedient and sincere, now explore to media have made some of them antisocial. It is highly debatable whether the
punishment
of cleaning street  is right or to send in a
prism
. I shall discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs. The major reason behind why criminal should
punishment
of cleaning the street.The
first
and foremost is prison act as institution of crime.
For instance
, there are a number of hard core criminals available in
prism
, tinting
teenager
send to
prism
Suggestion
the prism
,
then
they can get influence from Another criminal and they may become future  criminals.
Second reason
Suggestion
The second reason
is the no social acceptance. A good illustration
that is
society
do not accept X-prisms.
Therefore
youngster will not get a chance to enter into
society
.
As a result
youngster will be destroyed.
Moreover
, some teenagers do not know about what is wrong and right. They commit crimes under provoking by another person.
However
, other commentator opine that criminals are being sent to prison.
Firstly
,  when a
teenager
gets
punishment
in
prism
than other
teenager
influence from them and they do not commit any kind of crimes in life.
Secondly
, when crime is more serious than teenagers give
punishment
and age excuse  should be avoided. If a
teenager
does not give
punishment
just because of their age than
this
will disrespect of
society
and will not justice in the individual. To sum up, youth are the future of a country. So, need enough light to see the steps directly in front. Imprisonment is not the solution, but feel them in the dark and destroy all chances to re-enter into
society
.
Thus
,
punishment
like community works are better not for much brutal crime to teach lessons to youngsters.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Restorative justice
  • Rehabilitation
  • Community service
  • Alternative punishment
  • Psychological impact
  • Emotional impact
  • Incarceration
  • Consequences of actions
  • Amends
  • Juvenile offenders
  • Severity of the crime
  • Non-violent crimes
  • Deterrent effect
  • Punitive measures
  • Reformation
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