An increasing number of professionals,such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries.What problems does this cause?What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

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a plethora of people who are indeed professionals
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their fields in their less affluent countries have
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tended
to relocate to developed countries.They put their migration to reality in order to
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better life standards to meet their needs throughout their life expectancies.I aim to explore the problems which that
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the problems that are existed due to the
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the
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and foremost problem is that due to the migration of any countries’ professionals
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those countries can encounter with some economic and political issues.Because the utmost significance of the professionals’ working skills is existed over the country’s development.Because of
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the less developed situation
less developed situations
a less developed situation
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more and more unemployment cases may be created.In
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the people may confront with starvation which in turn can put them destitute.
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the shortage
of the professionals in the country
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some diseases cannot be dissolved and it takes its toll in terms of the people’s health welfares.There is one
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issue due to the
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is that without any professional teacher’s discipline or working skill
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the curricula system cannot be controlled even with appropriate authorities’ keen shrewdness. There are some viable methods to
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problem.
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of all
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the governments should offer some opportunities which can give the chance to gain
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a better livelihood
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the authorities may provide with proper
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salary, which
can trigger the
professioanls
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professional
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the governments are able to allocate the money to establish
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for doctors in order to give them a chance while doctors work with their patients
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a long time.When it comes to the teachers
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they can be offered some financial rewards or incentives because of their hardship during working with students. By way of conclusion
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the
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can induce countries to come across with some economic
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political issues which have some workable solutions
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as financial incentives
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good salary or to provide with some up-to-date facilities as
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a workplace for the conduct of scientific research
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled professionals
  • Healthcare systems
  • Education systems
  • Economic growth
  • Dependency on foreign aid
  • Social inequality
  • Quality healthcare
  • Quality education
  • Retain talent
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable growth
  • Scholarships
  • Professional development
  • Remote work capabilities
  • Local research funding
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