You and your family is moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there . Write a letter to a property agent . In your letter. Introduce yourself and your family. Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find . Give your preference for the location of the accomodation.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing his letter regarding
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the property which I am planning to purchase in Australia
next
month.
First
of all, I would like to introduce myself as Chahat Chawla, currently working for Rackspace as a Public Cloud Operations Engineer and
further
, will be immigrating to Melbourne by the end of
next
month along with my family which consists of me, my wife Divya she is a Doctor and our son Kabeer who is in 3 Standard.
Secondly
, I desire to reside in a fully furnished apartment and it should have at least 3 bedrooms in it with
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kitchen.
Moreover
, it must have a balcony with
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view.
Lastly
, I wish to locate in the main city where Shopping malls and hospitals are not far away and it is easy to commute.
In addition
to that, I like to live in
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society flats where it is not too noisy and where security is
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Resident Welfare Association. I look forward
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your feedback.
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faithfully, Chahat Chawla.
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