Some people argue that in the modern world it is necessary to be able to speak at least two foreign languages. Others say that it is better to know one foreign language very well than to have poor command of two foreign languages. What is your opinion?

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– good for your degree, good for your travels, good for your career – some people seem to think that being multilingual isn’t all that important anymore. We’re here to remind you that not only is it important, it may very well be necessary. It’s true that there are more and more people learning and speaking

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these days. In fact,

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is,

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some measures, the most widely spoken

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in the world, the de facto lingua franca. Approximately 1.5 billion people around the world speak

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, whether as their native tongue or as a foreign

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, and

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number is still growing. I have been learning

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for five years consciously for myself. And I want to say

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like my second

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which I can use for free. Now I don’t consider

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as some kind of achievement.

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is my life. Because I have a lot of foreign friends who I only speak

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with. I traveled a lot and I don’t know how I would have been without

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.I can speak German.

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is my third

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. I’m very glad. I learn German to study and to know. After all,

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opens up for you just a huge number of doors and opportunities. Thanks to the fact that I’m learning German, I had the experience of

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summer. And I can say for sure that these were the best days of my life. In conclusion,

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it is no longer cool to know one foreign

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, it's fascinating to know five or more.

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is not something complicated, rather it is what you need to spend your time on. Thanks to my parents who support me and

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opportunity. I’m sixteen and I know three languages I can speak fluently . I can do more, I know! I learn Italian and Polish. Because

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is my life and I want to invest in it to the fullest.

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The essay provides a clear response to the prompt by discussing the importance of being multilingual in the modern world. Make sure to directly address the arguments presented in the prompt and offer a balanced view.

coherence cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are present and effectively frame the discussion on the importance of learning multiple languages. Consider refining the thesis statement to clearly outline your stance on the topic.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

349 words

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