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Work is being done on street where you live .the noise is disturbing you.write a letter of complaint to local council .in your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solution to the problem

#work #street #noise #complaint #council
I am John residing at FLAT NO 1 REGENT COURT Maidenhead SL61ED.With the reference to the advertisement in the HINDU newspaper regarding the local council has arranged a compliance officer to investigate the problem happening in our
area
, I would like to
compliant
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complaint
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 about the noise generating due to
construction
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the construction
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 of
drainage
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the drainage
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 system. In our
area
drainage
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the drainage
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 system has been constructing
since
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for
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 six
month
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months
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.Large machines were used for the projects as well as many people are involving in the projects.The problem is the sound of the machines that
runs
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 during night times that
effects
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affects
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 the elder people,patients and children
studies
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 for the examination.
In addition
 to that machines emits huge smoke that would cause allergic effect for the children and babies who
residing
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 in our
area
. The digger is digging the ground that
cause
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causes
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foul
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a foul
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 smell make
difficult
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it difficult
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 for the people to move around in that
area
. I would suggest
to give
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request
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 to the project team
to
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apply
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not to operate the machine during night shifts. It would be grateful if the work can be done in a manual way where ever possible so as to reduce smoke and avoid parking risk of other
vehicle
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vehicles
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 residing in our
area
. I look forward
for
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 your reply
for
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 the problem being resolved. Yours faithfully, John
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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