Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, putting a ban on advertising aimed at children has become a debatable topic.While some people believe that commercials aimed at kids should be prohibited because of its negative effects, others are of the opinion that it should not be
produced by or subjected to forcing
essay will discuss the positive contributions of
medium of publicising despite its shortcomings. There are several reasons why advertising aimed at children should not be banned.
, commercials serve as a way of creating awareness to the general public about products
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events e.t.c.
in turn increases the sales and turnover of the company involved.
contributing to the economy as a whole.
In addition
, more jobs are
created for people leading to reduced unemployment rate in the society. In
view, advertising has done more good than harm in the society.
, despite the effective outcome of commercials targeted at children
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there are
some negative effects associated with it which should not be overlooked.
, toddlers
to develop some habits that might cause a great harm to their health.
For instance
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food awareness created on media could make the kids develop bad eating habits
which, however cause
which however cause
causes obesity and other health conditions.Statistics
that a large number of food-related health cases were traced to the publicity given to junks and drinks.
makes the aimed audience get so addicted to them without caution.
, some parents tried their best in putting their wards in check.
, parents still don't have control over what these young stars eat in school.
essay discussed why the advertisement aimed at youth should not be banned as well as the negative effects it causes.In my opinion, adolescent aimed commercials should not be eradicated, even though the negative effects is not to be overlooked.

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