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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn. In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job?

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While searching a work the majority of people pay th
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n the high wages which is considered the main benefit. The rest of seekers, contrariwise, choose other features of possible position like convenient schedule and a long vacation. In my opinion, salary and comfortable atmosphere are essential interests in every job.
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, a good payment allows us to maintain the lifestyle that we prefer. Thanks to finances, it becomes possible to travel around the world, give a good education to children, be satisfied buying a house you like and a comfortable car.
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, financial stability ad
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s to support a physical he
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healthy
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using sports facilities as well as eating organic food, which directly affects on life expectancy.
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, according to scientists from Stanford and Harvard universities, wealthy US citizens li
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live, on
verage 10 years more than the poor.
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, psychological comfort is
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It’s obvious to doctors that long-term stress in the workplace can lead to early strokes, developing of depression and occurring of high blood pressure.
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, working within a friendly team, the employee usually shows better results.
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 indicates the importance of mental comfort and explains the reasons why some people prefer
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 benefit. In conclusion, a high salary is indeed one of the key points when choosing a job.
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, we must not forget about the psychological component, which is very important for a long and happy life. Only the balance between these two reasons will help you find the right position.
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