Potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country 1976-2006

The line graph represents the data about potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European nation in
unit
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units
a unit
of grams from 1976 to 2006. Overall, potatoes and rice had been eaten by a European region shows both downward trends. Meanwhile, the
amount
of pasta shows an upward
trends
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trend
.
First
of all, in
initially
1976 potatoes are the most eaten by the European in just above 400 grams per person in a week.
Although
some fluctuate, it has been
slight
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slightly
increased in 1984
for
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to
around 450 grams. After that, the
amount
continue
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continues
to dropped
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to drop
steadily until the lowest point in 2006 for just almost 100 grams per person per week.
Secondly
, the
amount
of rice consumed in 1976 is around 300 grams and in declined steadily for almost 25 years reached nearly 150 grams in the year 2000.
However
, it was a significant
rose
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rise
to
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in
the year 2006 in
amount
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the amount
an amount
of around 220 grams. Other than that, pasta was the lowest food had been consumed in 1976
for
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to
250 grams a person.
On the other hand
, it was significant climbed until 1997 and remains stable throughout the time for exactly a half
kilogram
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kilograms
.
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