Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

These days,

perents

a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian

parents

do everything to make the

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of their children successful even by putting force on them. The detail reason of

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thought and the reasons why I believe that

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development is

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

for all will be discussed below. It is acknowledged by all that the main reason to put

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a strain

on children by

thier

of them or themselves

their

parents is to see them happy.

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, once the children

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grow

up and become successful in their life, it is the parents who get

immese

unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

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pleasure. In order to ensure the success, putting pressure on them is not uncommon. Here, seeing them happy means seeing them financially

sovent

a liquid substance capable of dissolving other substances

solvent

, social contributor, and respected by all.

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, if a child is rich enough to support

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of them or themselves

their

family

memers

one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)

members

and parents, the burden of the family becomes reduced and the parents no longer need to deal with

finacial

involving financial matters

financial

issues.

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, the well educated child can contribute to the society intellectually and financially.

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, the intelligent and solvent individuals are respected by all.

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, as all these things make the children happy in their life literally, parents find it pleasant to see them happy

any how

an informal or dialect form of anyway, used to indicate that a statement explains or supports a previous statement

anyhow

; perhaps insisting them harshly to keep in the right tract is completely acceptable to the parents.

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However

, forcing children to earn valuable knowledge and skills have

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a detrimental effect

detrimental effects

to them. The most critical problem that might occur due to putting stress on them is that the children may encounter mental trauma if

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process continues for long because

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at

that early age they want freedom in every aspect.

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, study shows that the metal development of the children takes place mostly in the early stage in their life;

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any external strain could lead severe damage to their mental health.

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, children oftentimes lose interest in any learning activities which are imposed on them.

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to mental illness and indifference

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to

learning new things, they might become rude while communicating with other peer groups. All of these issues are quite alarming for their

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development. In conclusion, parents undoubtedly think about the better

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of

ther

of them or themselves

their

the

Children. Despite most of them believe that putting

additional workload

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the additional workload

would help their

childern

a young person of either sex

children

to become successful in their career, the

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

consequences that

reveal

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will reveal

in the

future

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are certainly concerning.