Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
These days,
perents
do everything to make the a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
future
of their children successful even by putting force on them. The detail reason of this
thought and the reasons why I believe that this
development is negetive
for all will be discussed below.
It is acknowledged by all that the main reason to put characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
strain
on children by Suggestion
a strain
thier
parents is to see them happy. of them or themselves
their
In other words
, once the children grows
up and become successful in their life, it is the parents who get Suggestion
grow
immese
pleasure. In order to ensure the success, putting pressure on them is not uncommon. Here, seeing them happy means seeing them financially unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
immense
sovent
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First
, if a child is rich enough to support thier
family of them or themselves
their
memers
and parents, the burden of the family becomes reduced and the parents no longer need to deal with one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)
members
finacial
issues. involving financial matters
financial
Second
, the well educated child can contribute to the society intellectually and financially. Third
, the intelligent and solvent individuals are respected by all. Therefore
, as all these things make the children happy in their life literally, parents find it pleasant to see them happy any how
; perhaps insisting them harshly to keep in the right tract is completely acceptable to the parents.
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anyhow
Howerver
, forcing children to earn valuable knowledge and skills have Suggestion
However
detrimental effect
to them. The most critical problem that might occur due to putting stress on them is that the children may encounter mental trauma if Suggestion
a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
this
process continues for long because in
that early age they want freedom in every aspect. Suggestion
at
For example
, study shows that the metal development of the children takes place mostly in the early stage in their life; therefore
any external strain could lead severe damage to their mental health. Moreover
, children oftentimes lose interest in any learning activities which are imposed on them. In addition
to mental illness and indifference in
learning new things, they might become rude while communicating with other peer groups. All of these issues are quite alarming for their Suggestion
to
future
development.
In conclusion, parents undoubtedly think about the better future
of ther
Children. Despite most of them believe that putting of them or themselves
their
the
additional workload
would help their Suggestion
the additional workload
childern
to become successful in their career, the a young person of either sex
children
negetive
consequences that characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
reveal
in the Suggestion
will reveal
future
are certainly concerning.Submitted by parvezchaw on
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