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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is mostly believed that
transformation
Suggestion
the transformation
 is more useful to people than ignoring it and keeping the things constant. I believe there are more benefits to
this
 approach than drawbacks. Both will be discussed in
this
 essay. AN obvious advantages of
change
 are growth and development. It is significant for everyone to stay updated, learn new things and alter their life in a positive way, rather than feeling stuck without any kind of modification. A
change
 in job allows an individual to upgrade their career by having a rise in the
pay
Suggestion
payment
 and satisfaction of employment.
In addition
 to that, renovation leads to invention of innovative things.
This
 will not only enhance one's
lifestyle but
Accept comma addition
lifestyle, but
also
 adds to the advancement in the society. An upgrade from telephone to mobile phone, which can be used
wireless
Suggestion
wirelessly
 and is easy to carry anywhere, is an instance of positive revamp. Clearly, it is always helpful to accept reconstruction.
However
, a slight disadvantage of
change
 would be
adaptation
Suggestion
adaptable
. People are often agitated to adapt to the new
change
 as it requires time and effort in order to accept
such
 alterations.
As a result
, they are either worried or anxious, which makes them hard to adjust to those changes. A renovation in the workplace,
for example
, would be agitating to most employees and make them uncomfortable as they would need time to be aware of their surroundings. In short, the only reason why some people would like things the way they are, could be to prevent unnecessary anxiety. In conclusion,
although
 certain people do not feel the need to transform because they fear
change
, I strongly agree that it is required to have growth and development of
lifestyle
Suggestion
a lifestyle
.
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