International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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The main topic confirms the benefits that
tourism
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gave to many places, adding
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
eventual problems
on
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with
local people and the environment of these places
.
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.
Tourism
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for many counties is the principal resource of money,
for
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example
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in
south Italy place
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south Italy places
like Sardinia, Sicily
live
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lives
thanks to the
tourism
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,
where
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Where
the economy is not developed
such
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as in the
north
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northern
Italy. Local inhabitants
for
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not worried about eventual noise, in fact, there are a lot of
way
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ways
to take stable the situation.
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, the beaches are monitored by competent workers. So it
is a bit difficult remove
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is a bit difficult removed
removes a bit difficult
is a bit difficult remove
the
tourism
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for these
people which
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people, which
do not handle circulations of tourists.
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, the impact of
pollution it
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pollution, it
is a huge problem, but not as regards the impact of flights,
also
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because there are a lot of motivations to take the plain and not necessarily for trip but for the
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
of some tourists. Indeed, usually the do not respect the cleaning,
for
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example they
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example, they
should not throw away waste around the beach, mountain or city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
. In conclusion, In my opinion the advantages of
tourism
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as regards the earn that a place could have overweight the disadvantages, but Governments should make restriction
to
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of
some activities.
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example
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,
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instead to
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instead, to
use 80 boats to do some excursions could be used 20 per days.
reducing
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Reducing
the entrance of
money but
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money, but
respecting the impact of
environment
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the environment
. Governments should do pay for bad
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
using more workers to control giving more workplace.
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