The diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph explains
process
of electricity production in a hydroelectric Add an article
the process
power
station
.
Overall
, there are a number of stages, beginning with water
from the river to reaching to
the Change preposition
apply
power
station
.
Firstly
,Correct article usage
the
water
river enters in
a high-level reservoir, Change preposition
apply
while
there
dam is opened and is closed at Replace the word
their
nights
. After that, Fix the agreement mistake
night
water
is passed by reversible turbinus
to the Correct your spelling
turbines
turbine
power
station
in order to generate electricity there. After, having been
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
to
the Change preposition
apply
power
station
water
is generated and then
gets provided to national
grid by Add an article
the national
power
lines.
Afterwards, night
process starts Correct article usage
the night
by
Change preposition
with
the
number of stages Correct article usage
a
firstly
by releasing water
that is
kept in a low-level reservoir. Continually, water
flows back from reversible turbines to the power
station
and continues to go till
the dam after having finished Change preposition
to
pumping
stage.Correct article usage
the pumping
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "firstly".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, station, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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