Many people think that more money will make them happier. How important is money for happiness?

Some think that more

money

will bring us all sorts of happiness, where they think that in order to achieve

such

exuberant lifestyle

money

is vital. Whilst many people believe wealth is

omnipotent which

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omnipotent, which

will

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

your every desire. Having exponential amount of funds does make you feel important, powerful, helps feed your

vanity but

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vanity, but

there lies some limitations of the riches as well. Placing my opinion on

this

matter, people

nowadays seems

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nowadays seem

to be more obsessed with the monetary goals rather than having a healthy and balanced lifestyle. People who have acquired

substantial amount

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a substantial amount

of

money

, they aren’t happy and some who are living in a hut amidst the forest are having the time of their lives. There are some key factors resulting people in giving too much importance to wealth over other aspects of lives. Needless to say, the more cash they have, the more achievable their goals will be. If they had so many funds to have a lavish lifestyle, they could buy everything they would like to, from big houses to luxury cars. Seeing

this

they cannot buy loves of your family members, care of a mother, cure themselves of old age.

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Lastly, they

think that they can host parties encompassing with lots of substantial and influential

friends which

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friends, which

in-turns

makes

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make

their emotional demands fulfilled. Despite the fact that bill is the key to afford living expenses, hardly could it be the only way to feel happy.

Firstly having

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Firstly, having

big house

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a big house

seemingly having expensive branded clothes, jumping on any new

trends purchasing

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trends, purchasing

any new cars will only bring momentary relief rather than feeling happy. Having big houses does not guarantee the happiness

for

instance celebrities

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instance, celebrities

told the interviews that they were afraid of betrayal and mistrust from the close ones.

Secondly

blissfulness comes from within not

form

a giver or sender

from

amassing the materialistic things,

for example

a man is happy with buying his

first

small car whilst some teenager halfway around the world pushed a luxury car into the river. Many of them have

wrong idea

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the wrong idea

wrong ideas

about achieving joyfulness.

Finally

and more importantly, though, it is the quality of relationships built amongst family members that would create a happy and convivial atmosphere in which they live. Many of less affluent families have been seen to live with lower stress levels in their close relationships with each other. So concluding with the fact that happiness is a state of mind rather than placing

money

as omnipotent.