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, they aren’t happy and some who are living in a hut amidst the forest are having the time of their lives. There are some key factors resulting people in giving too much importance to wealth over other aspects of lives. Needless to say, the more cash they have, the more achievable their goals will be. If they had so many funds to have a lavish lifestyle, they could buy everything they would like to, from big houses to luxury cars. Seeing Use synonyms
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Finally
and more importantly, though, it is the quality of relationships built amongst family members that would create a happy and convivial atmosphere in which they live. Many of less affluent families have been seen to live with lower stress levels in their close relationships with each other. So concluding with the fact that happiness is a state of mind rather than placing Linking Words
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