Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to keep themselves occupied on their own. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion

There are different approaches on how the children should spend their free

time

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, as many defends children should be encouraged by parents to participate in

orginised

formed into a structured or coherent whole

organized

group activities where there are some believes that kids should find their own passion and learn to follow their interests. I will discuss both views and my stand point

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of

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topic. There are some valid points on why the children should be encouraged and guided to be

involed

connected by participation or association or use

involved

invoked

invalid

in

activites

any specific behavior

activities

by parents.

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, one of the challenging tasks of the parenting is ensuring healthy physical, cognitive and social development of the

child

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. It is

parents responsibility

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the parents responsibility

to observe the behaviour of the

child

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and guide it

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to improve the weaknesses and strenghten the stronger characteristics.

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, parents should analyse and help their kid

to get

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get

the most of the activities he can get access to. As an

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example, if

the

child

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has social anxiety and avoids playing with others the parent should seek group activities where he can experiment with talking to others in

safe environment

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a safe environment

.

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, in order to ensure the safety, parent has

theobligation

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the obligation

to research the facility and the competency of the caretakers that their

child

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is intend

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is intended

intends

to spend

time

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with.

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, some would argue

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approach limits the learning capability of the young and children should decide on how to spend their free

time

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on their own.

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The physiology

Physiology

Psychology

of a

child

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is delicate and easily impacted.While an attempt of an adult trying to guide for better, one can misjudge the needs of their offsprings and actually impair their ability to build their social skills, as decision making and damage their self-esteem. Another point is,

considiration

the process of giving careful thought to something

consideration

of generation gap

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as in average a parent will have 20-25 year age difference with their

child

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. What he/she considered to be beneficial might be outdated for the

child

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.

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, my parents did not have the technology to play video games and today they consider it waste of

time

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and they

constantly

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constant

pressure my younger brother.

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However today

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However, today

However today's

However today's today's

However todays

gaming became a sport between teenagers where they actively

enage

carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in

engage

with each other. If my brother have listened, he would have never been interested in getting involved with

computers

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computer

science and graphic design. In conclusion, both ideas are genuine in its own way. Sometimes it is important to get

involve

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involved

and provide a bit of push to ensure the development.

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, I think it is important for the

child

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to find their way on their own as it is impossible to estimate on needs. In my opinion parents should listen, research and support their

childrens

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children's

children

interests for

healthy

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health

improvement.