Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in the newspaper and watch news programs in television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The table compares percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories in five different countries in 2002. Overall, It is clearly seen that food, drinks and tobacco have the largest proportion by far for each country.

Moreover

, consumer spending for the leisure and education has the lowest percentages.

Initially

, in Turkey and Ireland, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was significantly higher than the other countries, at %32

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14 and %28.91 respectively.

Secondly

, expenditure on the leisure and education was

also

the highest in Turkey, at %4.35, whereas Italian consumers spent their money mostly on clothing and footwear with %9. It is apparent that Sweden had the lowest proportion of expenditure for both food/drinks/tobacco and clothing/footwear categories, at roughly %16 and %5 respectively. For leisure and education, Spain had the lowest percentage, at nearly %2, while for the other categories it had almost average.

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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