Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The university

should not accept equal numbers of male and females, students in every subject. According to diverse Physical and mental disorders of

genders their

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genders, their

body would work according to their capacity.

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and foremost, universities should credit equal numbers of females and males. If universities would take the diverse

disapointment

a feeling of dissatisfaction that results when your expectations are not realized

disappointment

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, the

reason

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behind every

sucessful

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

country is Educated

genration

all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age

generation

. Literacy rate should be high for

developed country

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a developed country

developed countries

. The

reason

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why universities should not take distinction resolution would cause the

dishearted

forsaken by owner or inhabitants

deserted

of students. Before few years, the law

has passed

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passes

in Pakistan that merely 30 percent women and 70 percent men would be selected for

medical field

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the medical field

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refers to the speaker or writer

injustice for those Ladies who wanna become

doctor

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a doctor

doctors

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, the

reason

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why universities do not take fair resolution between men and women because the ratio of ladies who are

invole

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involved

involve

in social activities are very low, the main

reason

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this

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act is

sick mentality

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a sick mentality

of men. They don't allow their women for

jobs

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jobs, however

however

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, they get

massy

dirty and disorderly

messy

mushy

in early age due to responsibilities of

childs

a young person of either sex

children

child

they do not allow by their men for jobs so it is

the good

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the best

decision of government. To Recapitvlate, the diverse decision between women and men is

benefical

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for progressive results. Due to

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seltlement

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public can serve the society more.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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219 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender diversity
fostering innovation
educational experience
enforcing gender quotas
merit and potential
individual achievements
natural differences
gender equality
reducing gender stereotypes
balanced workforce
traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
fluctuating applicant numbers
compromise on quality
diversity aspects

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

.In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.