What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

Nowadays more
Accept comma addition
Nowadays, more
and more people moving overseas in order to get sufficient education or apply for well-paid jobs. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am going to write about
pros
Suggestion
the pros
and cons of
this
situation. On the one hand, moving abroad can be an unforgettable experience because it has many benefits. One of them is that,
this
kind of events
improve
Suggestion
improves
people's outlook.
For instance
, when someone leaves his home town and moves to another
country
with different society and language,
this
encourages him to
also
leave his comfort zone and stay open minded.
Therefore
he is going to know and understand a lot of information about
this
country
and its culture. The experience and knowledge gained from
this
will broaden his horizons significantly. Another advantage of
given
Suggestion
giving
situation is that it can be great
push
Suggestion
pushy
pushed
to become an independent. When there is none, neither family nor friends around to give advice or rely on,
person
Suggestion
people
a person
the person
will only count on himself and make
decision
Suggestion
decisions
a decision
the decision
by his on. Research has shown that teenagers which studying in another
country
are more mature and independent than their peers.
On the other hand
, there may be some downsides of moving abroad like homesickness and depression. Because of these factors
this
kind of journey may become quite arduous, especially for
teengers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
and adolescents. Studies
has shown
Suggestion
have shown
that adolescence is one of the most stressful and anxious period of our lives and without the support of our relatives or friends it can become much harder. So sometimes moving to another
country
may seem like extra pressure. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly believe that despite some possible disadvantages, go to overseas can be the most important decision in anyone's life.
Submitted by shaxzodbek5509 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: