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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

#country #study
Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
 and more people moving overseas in order to get sufficient education or apply for well-paid jobs. In
this
 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am going to write about
pros
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the pros
 and cons of
this
 situation. On the one hand, moving abroad can be an unforgettable experience because it has many benefits. One of them is that,
this
 kind of events
improve
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improves
 people's outlook.
For instance
, when someone leaves his home town and moves to another
country
 with different society and language,
this
 encourages him to
also
 leave his comfort zone and stay open minded.
Therefore
 he is going to know and understand a lot of information about
this
country
 and its culture. The experience and knowledge gained from
this
 will broaden his horizons significantly. Another advantage of
given
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giving
 situation is that it can be great
push
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pushy
pushed
 to become an independent. When there is none, neither family nor friends around to give advice or rely on,
person
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people
a person
the person
 will only count on himself and make
decision
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decisions
a decision
the decision
 by his on. Research has shown that teenagers which studying in another
country
 are more mature and independent than their peers.
On the other hand
, there may be some downsides of moving abroad like homesickness and depression. Because of these factors
this
 kind of journey may become quite arduous, especially for
teengers
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
 and adolescents. Studies
has shown
Suggestion
have shown
 that adolescence is one of the most stressful and anxious period of our lives and without the support of our relatives or friends it can become much harder. So sometimes moving to another
country
 may seem like extra pressure. To conclude,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly believe that despite some possible disadvantages, go to overseas can be the most important decision in anyone's life.
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