Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

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Marketing sell of products has a great impact of country development. Out

connects a noun with the preceding word

these

import

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imports

of goods stands out.

However

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, some people consider buying products in other countries

advantageble

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device whereas

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device, whereas

others prefer the mother land made one.

This

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essay tries to highlight both sides of the topic. Clearly, purchases are made in other countries give people get original and brand products.

For instance

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, Gucci, Chanel and other conspicuous goods are well-known all around

world

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the world

Moreover

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, the brand has

special limited collection which

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a special limited collection, which

a special limited collection which

unable to get

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into

our own country.

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addition it

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addition, it

is cheaper to buy imported products than mother land made ones.

For example

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, Australia values their goods and

its

the thing named or in question

costs very expensive.

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, the main disadvantage is that,

purchasing international

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purchasing, international

brand products affects the local economy. Like online websites provide buyers cheap products. While getting the other national stuffs our local production goods are unsold left over.

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, local production get loss and many of citizen loose their jobs. Markets are one of the best to relate

this

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situation. Less goods and services are sold more their risk to lost jobs. In conclusion, buying products

are made

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is made

by other countries have numerous choices to pick the best suitable for our requirement. But it affects local production people and lead to loss of jobs.

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Many products that we buy are made in other countries. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

Your opinion

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people believe that the only important thing in life is his or her work. Without a successful career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?