In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Living in a
country
where everybody
have
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has
to speak
a
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an
other
language
expect her
/
his self mother tongue, certainly,
this
can create serious social problems and
also
practical problems.
This
essay
strongly agree
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strongly agrees
that living in a
country
that you cannot speak
local
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the local language
language
there, of
course
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course, this
this
can cause several problems to you,
for instance
, you expose social problems,
such
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Such
as you
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as, you
will not able to
commucation
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communicate
communication
with other people to working or become
friend
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
Friend
with another of
this
problem
can make practical problems,
for example
, You cannot make a successful working of
relationship
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the relationship
.
First
of all,
this
can make deep social problems,
for example
, he
/
she will not able to find
a
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an
exellent
very good;of the highest quality
excellent
friend or a person who can help her
/
him. So
this
can make more and more problems.
Besides
,
this
can cause
problem
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a problem
to
job
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a job
or every working that it
call
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calls
Practical
problem
,
such
as, buying and more and more work
,
Accept space
,
however
,
this
also is
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has also been
a serious
problem
. In conclusion, immigration to graduate or every working to a
country
where main
language
that
country
is different with
language
that
pearson
a human being
person
pursuing
this
can
mak
engage in
make
mark
mask
problem
to everybody
who
objective case of "who" ("who" is also often used in the objective)
whom
he
/
she does not know or less find out main
language
that
country
,
for example
, it can cause main social issues,
furthermore
, practical problems.
Finally
, In my attitude, everybody who decide
going
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to go
to a foreign
country
, he
/
she can learn about that
language
and after that he
/
she go that
country
.
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