The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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As
the industrialization had
occured
come to pass
occurred
the manufacturing of the
product
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has been
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
as well as
demand
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the demand
of the products is
also
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located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
reused
rushed
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As
consequence
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a consequence
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it
contribute
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contributes
some amount in
harming environment
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a harming environment
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are myriad
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a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspects
which are accountable for
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accurence
an event that happens
occurrence
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suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
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essay to curb
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problem
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commence with, it is irrefutable that,
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the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
are
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a source
source
sources
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of harming the
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climate by
taking the
dvantage
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantage
of people and their needs.
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As
a result, it
consume
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consumes
more fuel to make
product
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which
detoriate
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorate
the air by
buring
concealing something under the ground
burying
burning
it, meanwhile
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the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
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being or located on or directed toward the side of the body to the west when facing north
left
the
chamicles
relating to or used in chemistry
chemicals
in river or lakes which are created during the making
product
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The
way they
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contaminate the water.
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addition, for
maing
most important element
main
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definite article
the
gate
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products and
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set up or found
establish
established
establishes
the companies, so much
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land
is required
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for that people cut down the trees to grab a land, cause the
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problems as
globalwarming
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global warming
and green house effect,
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supplemente
add as a supplement to what seems insufficient
supplement
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view
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,
companies
also
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try to allure people by packing
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supliment
add as a supplement to what seems insufficient
supplement
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of them or themselves
their
the ie
the
product
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sale which
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sale, which
help
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helps
them to compete the other companies as well as help to sustain in
market
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the market
.
therfor they
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Therefore, they
Therefore they
Therefor they
Therfor they
published the
product
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with excessive packing,
in
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after
they use non-
biodegredable
capable of being decomposed by e.g. bacteria
biodegradable
materials which harm the
envirment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
in
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In
the direction of
solvning
finding a solution to a problem
solving
problems., plethora steps can be taken to solve
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this probles
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this problem
this problems
these problems
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
first
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and foremost
meticules
marked by precise accordance with details
meticulous
step is
govermnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should restrict the
manufactureing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
unnessesary
not necessary
unnecessary
products as well as stop to drain
chemicle
relating to or used in chemistry
chemicals
in river.
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second
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Second
,
government
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the government
should introduce the 3r policy and
prolifarate
grow rapidly
proliferate
the
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
about it to make
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people
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with
a
problem
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, people should
also
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help the
govermnet
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
to
metigate
lessen or to try to lessen the seriousness or extent of
mitigate
such
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problem
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and for that they should stop buying
excessive paking
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excessive packing products
excessive packing product
an excessive packing product
excessive parking product
excessive paging product
product
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throught
from beginning to end
through
which they
cacn
able to
can
indulge the companies to publish the products with less packing.
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last
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Last
but not least,
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the government
government
increase
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increases
the rate of fuel, the way they can curtail the utilization of fuel in companies.
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To
synopsis, nothing is
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
.
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if
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If
people try to solve
this
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serious
problem
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, they can do it.
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however
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However
, if the steps should not be
takken
understood in a certain way; made sense of
taken
as war footing, the earth will
bacome
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
the boiling pot where the life for the human is
ardous
characterized by effort to the point of exhaustion; especially physical effort
arduous
to live.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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