The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the only mean to decrease the volume of

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in urban cities is by lowering the need for commuters to

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, buying goods and go to school. These three major groups of commuter account for majority of the whole population in cities and

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cause substantial burdens to the

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. In my opinion, I definitely agree that these people can take their individual responsibilities to help reducing the

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volume and tailbacks in many ways. Regarding the workers and students, they usually commute to

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and school at around 7am and

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often off from school at 5pm or

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at 6pm.

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, the vast majority of the cars and buses are congested on the road and tunnels.

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, it wastes numerous people time to wait in the long queue.

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, people always go shopping during

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the weekends

and there is considerable increase in

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the number

of holiday drivers who own their cars.

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, the total numbers of private cars significantly surge during weekends.

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, people may argue that more transportation infrastructure should be built

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of limiting the commuter’s needs,

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, many cities already face a lot of air pollution problem due to the heavy

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jam and the highways can ruin the city view. In conclusion, limiting the need for commuters to

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, study and shopping should be the

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priority to be considered by the governments in order to tackle the

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congestion.

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, each individual should take responsibility to avoid travel during the peak hours. Car owners can consider to use public transports to reduce the total

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of vehicle in the cities.