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Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today’s society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that we would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss both opinions and give yours.

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It is widely known that computers can be found everywhere nowadays, and occasionally they are an inevitable realm. While some people regard these technologies tend to be
obstacle
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an obstacle
 rather than supportable devices, I would argue that they cannot be separated
for
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from
 our
life
 thank to their huge function. Following the developing era,
computers
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computer
 technology
are
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is
 hardly to be isolated from our daily activities because most of people necessities can be covered by an advanced technology like computers. In
supermarkets
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supermarkets, for
for example
, computer eases tellers in accounting of purchasing or transaction, which result in decreasing number of lines. For
this
 reason, a comfort of shoppers can always be ensured. It is
thus
 an evident proof of why computers
is
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are
 a part of people
life
.
However
,
this
 does not mean that computers cannot be a barrier in the way people ran their
life
.
Firstly
, a habit
in
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of
 using computers for writing causes people
be
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are
 lazy in applying handwriting, so without computer people prefer for not writing
instead
.
Furthermore
, various tools equipped
in
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on
with
 computers
attracts
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attract
 people
in
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from
 wasting their time. Abundant games and other application installed in computers prompts users to stay home and neglect their main responsibilities for their family and job. Not only
this
,
computers even
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computers, even
 threat
people
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peoples'
 future in acute dependence, and
therefore
 they are less interaction each other. To conclude, I do believe that
computer's presence
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the computer's presence
 in our
life
 has an immense role in spite of any drawbacks.
Hence
, people have to know how to use it wisely, by means that using computers appropriately is would be a better way has to be thoroughly thought.
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