The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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It is often argued that the
internet
is turning the world into a global village and all the people will become
tink
judge or regard; look upon; judge
think
and behave in the same way. I prefer more agree than disagree with
this
state
Suggestion
statement
.
To begin
with, most
people especially
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people, especially
children, relax and attend leisure activities by using the
Internet
. They mainly stay at home and watch movies which are being downloaded from entertainment websites. They prefer to register and become a
membership
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member
of a virtual social network
such
as
facebook
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Facebook
or blogs where they can discuss specific aspects of daily life. Even though, they
makes
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make
friends and live as if they are living in the real life.
In addition
to
this
, foreign students usually keep in touch with their relatives through webcam, a service provided by the
Internet
. Of course,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
connects people, it makes us closer to each other
this
one of the reason
of
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for
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
creation. But it
cant
can not
can't
change our life so dramatically until we literally move in it. To make the state come true the
internet
must replace all the consequences that affect our
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and thinking. And the
internet
is absolutely not able to do that. It could impose us some new common habits, no more than that.
For example
, I have a few
best
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good
friends who are from different cities, even countries. And despite of that we communicate mainly using the
internet
. And even if we have some
denendence
the state of relying on or being controlled by someone or something else
dependence
of
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on
it we
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it, we
all
difference
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different
people
woth
expresses the means used
with
worth
our features,
Untill
up to, before the time
until
entail
the
internet
can’t replace our environment
,
Accept space
,
culture, education and satisfy all our needs, it will never happen.
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