Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to take care of the environment,while others believe that it is the responsibility of the people to take care of the environment.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays
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people think that
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it is
it's
the
responsibility
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of
government
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to take care of the
environment
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while others think or
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
it should be a collective
responsibility
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.I shall be
discussive
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussing
both views and give my own opinion.
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,
the
responsibility
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of any
government
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is to protect the interest of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
citizens by providing with
necessary needs
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the necessary needs
of the people
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
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e
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E
Transportation
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good road infrastructure
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schools as well as environmental
management
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.These are done by making policies and providing the training required for its application.It is actually the duty of any
government
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to make laws guiding the
management
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of the
environment
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,
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,
this
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had to be done because the environmental
management
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is huge because it involves a larger percentage of the population.Example is that environmental
management
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involves waste clearing
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waste collection
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noise pollution and at each point there is a
government
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agency whose role and
responsibility
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is to handle
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.
Moreover
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,
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,
monitoring which includes
setting
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the setting
of standards are
also
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being handled by
government
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.
In
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addition if
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addition, if
this
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is not done by
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government
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the government
there will problems in the
environment
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which lead to sickness of all
kind
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kinds
on the population.
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Therefore if
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Therefore, if
the
management
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of the
environment
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is left in the hand of everybody
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,
this
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will increase the participation of the populace in the effective
management
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of their
environment
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.
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Hence if
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Hence, if
there is collective action it will improve
i
objective form of "I"
me
I
.
e
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E
the health and
welbeing
a contented state of being happy and healthy and prosperous
wellbeing
of the people
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reduction in the number of sick people in the society
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increase economic participation of the people and
thus
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bring economic benefit in the country at large.
In
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addition it
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addition, it
will reduce bush burning to a large extent before farming activities.
On the other hand
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it could bring about chaos if what the citizens are doing is without a guide or do not go through approve standards.
This
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could
back fire
the backward escape of gases and unburned gunpowder after a gun is fired
backfire
on the
management
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in a place where there is no central
cordination
the skillful and effective interaction of movements
coordination
i
objective form of "I"
me
I
.
e
Suggestion
E
everybody will what he feels
its
it is
it's
okay. To
conclude there
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conclude, there
is the need for proper
cordination
the skillful and effective interaction of movements
coordination
in the
management
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of the
environment
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,
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,
this
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can be
acheived
to gain with effort
achieved
by setting up a well funded organisation that will have to
cordinate
bring order and organization to
coordinate
this
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multifacetal
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activity and its only the
government
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of the people that can
guaranty
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
such
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.
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