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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

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 In the world of reality
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 truth is
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 hidden by corruption. Who is to blame - the journalist? The one who brings morals and manages the information reaching us
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This
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 In the game of politics be the biggest party
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 be the higher payer or even an influence the news channel is at your footsteps
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 Journalism and facts should be crystal
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clear, whereas
 information you put or the hype you create should get you the most viewers
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the policy in new media overrules
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This
 connection between news originality and its viewer is through the journalist who we look up to as our guides in the tough times
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However nowadays
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However, nowadays
 we are lacking journalist in the capes of commentators
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For
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example, these
 people just comment and nag about something they disagree with that too on
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the internet
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may be
 on religion
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 terrorism
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genderism
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 Moving on to
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 World wide web is that one tool people use to post their half knowledge or the facts that are only righteous just
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 As it is rightly said half knowledge is a dangerous thing. In the final statement
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 will conclude that journalism has lost its virtues and actuality where people are sure that everything in world wide web is real life its time to show mirrors to the community whose missing it. Be
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smarter
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 Be more active
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look for the sources that are verifiable
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 In the world of hoax the truth must prevail
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