The money spent by hovernments on space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree .

It is sometimes argued that governments in some countries are wasting large amount of money on space exploration programmes rather than allocating these funds to public services. I completely agree with
this
view.
To begin
with, there are several reasons why public services are should not to be funded.
Firstly
, we have a limited resources to spend, so if we will spend money on public services, we will just improve what we have
instead
of discovering new sources.
Secondly
, population of Earth is growing through the years and if we do not find new planet as a source of what we need, we would experience a famine.
Secondly
, it takes time to train workers who are offering services like teachers, doctors, police and etc.
Furthermore
, public servants do jobs, that has positive impacts on society,
however they
Accept comma addition
however, they
use things which are endless. On the other hand, I believe that governments should carry on spending money the space missions, rather than the on vital public services. So we need to discover other planets and search there for essential things without of which, we can not able to live. For instance, oxygen to breathe, water to drink and of course food eat. And, if we find such planet where, is acceptable to survive for humans, so we can move the part of our population there and be a multi planetar species. Also, we know that there are plenty of galaxies and planet inside of them, so at least in one of the all planets , there must be another minded species like humans. Finally, the space is a full of various planet where might be the another energy source. In coclusion, I believe that authorities of the country should continue funding space projects which will benefit us all.
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