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Nowadays people work too hard. What is the reason for this? What should employers do to prevent employees from over working?

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Nowadays people are working stressful routine. I want to discuss on
this
 statement. In my opinion, some employers t
o hire
Suggestion
hire
employees without i
nsuarence.
promise of reimbursement in the case of loss; paid to people or companies so concerned about hazards that they have made prepayments to an insurance company
insurance
 Because, they think just themselves. They do not care about workers. Several company owners are g
reed
Suggestion
greedy
and they just think about e
arn
Suggestion
earning
 a lot of money.
Additionally
, employees should
work
 8 hours. But sometime they
work
 extra hour to support their family or to lead a luxury life.
That is
 why they earn extra money.
For instance
, in our country employees w
orkhard
Suggestion
work hard
a
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
minimum wage and they
work
 12 hours.
On the contrary
,
c
Accept space
,
ivil servants
work
 8 hours and they have t
wo
in the direction of
to
rest-day in a week.
Besides
,
t
Accept space
,
hey can take one time vacation in a year. Civil servants take a high salary.
Additionally
, some managers are fair. They can caring their workers.These employees have a h
ealthy
Suggestion
health
i
nsuarence,
promise of reimbursement in the case of loss; paid to people or companies so concerned about hazards that they have made prepayments to an insurance company
insurance
a
Accept space
,
high salary and one rest-day. To sum up, employers need to motivate employees to take leaves and spend time with the family.
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