Most people prefer ready to eat food outside of their homes rather than home made food now.Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages.

In recent times quite a lot of individuals tend to patronize fast
food
joints for their daily meals rather than cooking at
home
.In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss both views and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am quite in agreement of the advantages than
this
advantange
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advantageous
advantage
. In one hand fast
food
business in recent times had increased in our society these days to meet the demands of quite a lot of working class people.Due to the
straneous
characterized by or performed with much energy or force
strenuous
nature of our modern day jobs it has increasingly become challenging cooking at
home
and preparing for work on
daily basis
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a daily basis
.
In addition
,
Accept space
,
the long hours of work in our various offices had not given
opportunity but
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an opportunity, but
an opportunity but
rather made it imperative the one will have to eat during lunch time in one of the fast
food
joints.One of the examples of the importance of the fast
food
business is the high rate of employment.It has helped in creating jobs to the teeming youth in our society.
Secondly it
Accept comma addition
Secondly, it
had improved the supply chain for movement of goods from the farm to the fast
food
companies.
This
has improved economic activities and economic
wellbeing
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well being
of the farmers.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
the patronage of the fast
food
places has made many of the youths and people lazy.Laziness in the
sence
a general conscious awareness
sense
that cooking at
home
had been relegated to the background.The cost of
food
in
resturants
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
had increasingly become so expensive that it patronage will affect the economic
welbeing
a contented state of being happy and healthy and prosperous
well-being
wellbeing
of the average family.Cooking of
food
at
home
is an art that should be encouraged
,
Accept space
,
eating outside
home
could lead to intake of junk
food
prepared by unqualified chefs.The presence of junk foods in the society had
increase
Suggestion
increased
and may lead to ill health. In conclusion the patronage of
food
in fast
food
joints by quite a lot people will increase as the economy and living standards improve.
Hence
the economic benefits
is
Suggestion
are
more and will add value to the economy.
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