Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that the most common disease these days is diabetes. Using

sugar

and

sugar

products

contributes to an increase in the number of diabetics.

Thus

, some think that the

government

should take action to

supervision

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consuming

sugar

,

while

others believe that the

sugar

consumer should

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control their usage of

sugar

. In my opinion, both the

government

and the

people

should work together to control

consuming

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sugar

. There are many ways that the

government

can control

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sugar

. One of them, the

government

can increase the customs fee on

sugar

and

sugar

products

;

as a result

, the

sugar

and

sugar

products

prices will rise. That will

leads

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to a decrease in consuming

sugar

. The other way is to increase health awareness about the harmful effects of overusing

sugar

in our diet.

For example

, increasing the number of advertisements on

tv

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and street about damages caused by

sugar

or

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some medical

lecture

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lectures

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in

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school

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schools

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where the kids who are the most consumed

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sugar

products

.

On the other hand

,

people

have to keep an eye on their

sugar

consumption. They can decrease their usage in many different ways.

In

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instance, they can avoid

dring

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drinking

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soft drinks where they contain a large amount of

sugar

, or by

stop

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stopping

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adding

sugar

in their drinks and using a natural sweetness like honey

instead

.

Moreover

, being a smart shopper will help to

reduced

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consuming

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the consumption of

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sugar

;

for example

, we can purchase free

sugar

products

. In conclusion, many

people

have diabetes, where

sugar

plays the leading to increasing the number of diabetics. I believe that the

government

and

people

work together to

reducing

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reduce the consumption

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of

consuming

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sugar

. The

government

can raise health awareness

between

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people

, and consumers can

decreasing

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sugar

using

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.